The best thing about my book is it is very suspensful, you never know for sure what is going to happen next! There are many suspensful events that the author creates. There is also alot of use of foreshadowing, yet it still leaves the reader wondering what is going to happen next. This is personally the best thing about the book in my opinion.
A bad thing that i think is in my book is how the author makes it kind o f harder for you to figure out what is gong on. I said that i thought a good thing was suspense. I do think suspense is good but there is alot of confusion in my story. Which can be entertaining but i think it is also a sort of disadvantage to a story.
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